I picked up Every Witch Way again! Woo-hoo! See? I just needed a little breather. I’m in deep editing mode with my critique partner. Where do I need to add? What needs improvement? How can I get those last 25K words? I think if I expand where I need to, I’ll be okay, but I have to decide what needs expansion and what can stay as is. Part of my problem is that I have a whole lot of dialogue and not enough description. But, the dialogue doesn’t flow as well when I break it up. Must ponder on this issue a bit more.
I’m taking an online workshop with Sylvia Day about showing and not telling while writing. It’s offered over at Romance Divas and she’s even helping us with bits of our individual manuscripts each day. If you’re interested, you can still join in. Go check it out!
