Okay, so I was working on In Ice and something just wasn’t gelling. Something was wrong, but I couldn’t put my finger on what exactly. I read the whole thing through and still just wasn’t getting it. The mysterious something was off.
Then I finally hit on it.
The sex was wrong. The scenes were good and *ahem* sexy, but just not right for these characters because they changed on me half-way through. What worked at the beginning didn’t work at the end. So I had to sit these characters down and figure out what their real issues were. They decided they wanted their sex hotter to help work out some of their conflicts.
Urgh.
Is it bad that I blushed my way through their first scene? You’ll never know which one it is because I don’t write in order, but dang. These two are diiiiirty.
